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Welcome to Merlin's Story, a tale of the life of Merlin. (Merlin is a Fictionous Character, based off of the British King Aurelianus Ambrosius, Created by Medeival Author Geoffrey of Monmouth) If you would like to read this blog, I suggest you start with the oldest posts. They go in order, like a book. If you would like to read more of my work, go to Ssenrah Naboo from the link list. Ssenrah Naboo has many of my opinions, theories, and observations regarding the world we live in.

Saturday, February 6, 2010

A Cry in the Dark


The adults looked at one another before looking at Uther.


 

"Don't look at me," Uther said, surprised they would volunteer him, "Yeh two are his family."


 

Blaise let out a deep sigh before looking at Aithne out of the corner of his eye. Nodding his head once, he said "Uther is right. It's our responsibility."


 

"Merlin," Aithne began, but at that precise moment, the messenger decided he would butt in, take his chance.


 

"A royal message from the recently returned heir to the throne, Aurelianus Ambrosius, seeks help from the great wizard Merlin. Would you like to hear his message?"


 

Not waiting for an answer, the messenger barged on.


 

" Merlin, you must come to help. Deganwy Castle is under siege, and if you leave immediately, we will only be able to hold out for maybe another week. Though I am heir to the throne, more are loyal to Vortigern than to I, as he has been on the throne for years, and few remember I. Please come, I need your help. If Deganwy is taken, then all is lost. Please come, and bring Uther with you. End of message sire," said the messenger, bowing to Merlin and scuttling out of the way, still bowing.


 

Merlin, for one, was stunned. Aurelianus was asking him for help? He barely even knew Aurelianus, and Aurelianus barely knew him.


 

Blaise put his half-eaten apple on the counter and walked over to Merlin.


 

"Don't worry about it Merlin. You're not going, you're needed here," said Blaise, putting a hand on Merlin's back. "It's getting late. You ought to be getting to bed now, shouldn't you?"


 


 

Before Merlin could answer, Blaise was shoving him towards his bedroom, Shiroix being treated to the same.


 

"Goodnight!" Blaise said, spewing more of the apple he had just picked up again, and closed the door on Merlin. While the door had no lock, Merlin had no doubt Blaise had put some sort of spell on it or another, as that was how Blaise did things.


 

Merlin reluctantly walked slowly over to his bed and sat on it. When he looked over to Shiroix's side of the room, he found that Shiroix was swinging a bag he had bought from a local merchant over his shoulder. To someone who didn't know Shiroix, it would seem as if his bag were empty. But Merlin knew better. Shiroix somehow managed to keep all of his belongings in the tiny bag, and him draping the bag over his shoulder only ever meant one thing: he was going somewhere.


 

"So where are you off to?" Merlin asked, as could only be expected of him.

"Deganwy Castle," replied Shiroix, opening the window in their room.


 

"But Blaise said we can't go."


 

"Blaise said you can't go. He didn't say anything about me, so I am neither able to go and not able to go, and able to make my own decision for the matter. And I choose to go. As we both know, I am the better wizard and warrior."


 

Shiroix did have a point. While most children in Atlantis couldn't do magic at the age Merlin and Shiroix currently were at, Merlin and Shiroix could perform small types of magic, nothing like lifting a boulder or defeating an army. Yet, they could do things like change the pictures on a wall, temporarily cast an image over an object so as to make it appear different, and levitate objects no bigger than the hand. Occasionally, they had competitions and Shiroix always won. Never once did Merlin win.


 

"I'm going with you," said Merlin after a Shiroix who had one leg outside and one in.


 

"Well, two are better than one, even if one of them is second rate, ahem, Merlin," replied Shiroix, coughing the last part.


 

"Speak for yourself," said Merlin with a mostly straight face.


 

"You're getting better at comebacks, but keep working."


 

When both were outside, they began to creep along the wall of the house, ducking under the main room window where Blaise, Aithne, and Uther were. It was not long before the twosome managed to get past the house and on the road. The challenge now was to make it outside the city gates without being noticed, which presented a slight problem considering that coastal cities such as Ala Bora employed a guard that consisted of half the men over age twenty-five in the city.


 

"What are yeh two doin'? Yeh two are supposed to be in yeh rooms!" said Uther, who had somehow managed to sneak up on Merlin and Shiroix.


 

"W-w-we-e-e were j-j-ust-" started Merlin, only to be finished by Shiroix.


 

"We are going to help your brother, the sire Ambrosius."


 

"Well I guess we'll be keepin' each other company then," said Uther, a fierce look in his eye.


 

Uther waited as the words sunk into the twos' heads.


 

"Wait, you mean you're coming with us?" asked Merlin.


 

"No, actually, yeh're coming with me," Uther said in an unarguable tone, "I decided I was going to go help me brother, for after all, he is me brother, and he was calling for help. Then I heard yeh two climbing out as I was leavin', and here we are now."


 

Thus it was, and the threesome set out. With Uther with them, Merlin and Shiroix had no need to worry about the guards, for Uther was a greatly respected man amongst the wizards.


 

Before too long, they were back on the mainland and finding a place to camp. Eventually, they settle upon a clearing in the forest about a kilometer from the coast. The fire lit the entire clearing, and nothing would be able to approach unnoticed.


 

"Merlin, come here, I need your help," called Shiroix as he finished setting up what he called 'precautions', which looked to be all sorts of devilish traps.


 

"You asking me for help? Me, the inferior little boy that is a burden to the great master's work? Why, it will be a pleasure!" over-exaggerated Merlin in a sarcastic tone.


 

"Even the greatest need support, as you have yet to learn, Merlin. As you know, I lived solitary for as long as I can remember before I met you. I think I know a little more about setting up camp than you."


 

As if to prove his point, Shiroix cut a string with his fingernail. Almost immediately following, a net appeared out from under a pile of leaves, and caught Merlin, who was not pleased.


 

"See?" said Shiroix, a devilish grin on his face.


 

"Put me down Shiroix," said Merlin, who was swaying slightly upside down in the net while rotating. Not at all a pleasant experience.


 

With another movement, Shiroix sliced another string, and Merlin fell on his head


 

"Wasn't that lovely," muttered Merlin under his breath, rubbing his now sore head.


 

"Havin' fun, eh Merlin?" asked Uther who had been watching Merlin and Shiroix with mild interest.


 

"Oh yes, this has just been a bundle of fun!" replied Merlin with a grimace.


 

Uther chuckled. "Well yeh two ought to get some rest. I'll take the first watch."


 

Neither Merlin nor Shiroix argued. They both almost happily walked over to the fire and lay down on the ground. From his small bag, Shiroix pulled out two thin cots and blankets, both of which should not have fit in the bag. Merlin just shook his head and forgot about it. Shiroix never told him how he managed to fit so much stuff. Merlin suspected it was magic, but Shiroix would not confirm it. Typical.


 

"Sleep tight Merlin, let the bed bugs bite. We all know that'll be a benefit," said Shiroix with a smile on his face, passing Merlin a cot and then a blanket.


 

"You too Shiroix."

***


 

"Merlin! Merlin! Wake up! It's yer turn for watch!" whispered Uther as he gently shook Merlin awake.


 

Merlin felt as though he had only gotten five minutes of sleep, though he knew it had really been several hours. Reluctantly, Merlin sat up and rubbed his weary eyes.


 

"Your watch is over when the moon is above that tree," Uther told Merlin, pointing to a tree about two thirds of the way across the clearing from where the moon currently was. Merlin estimated he'd be on watch for about three, maybe four hours.


 

Merlin walked over to the bush where Uther had been keeping watch and looked around. There wasn't much to see, except Uther lying down on Merlin's cot and falling asleep. The next few hours were to be boring ones.


 

Through the night, Merlin developed a routine. For a hundred foot taps he would look one direction, then he would turn to his right. Then another hundred taps and he would turn again. This pattern was repeated until he had gone in a complete circle, and then he would start again.


 

Coming to the end of his third rotation, Merlin turned to face away from camp. He saw nothing, nothing but darkness.

"Now you're dead," said Blaise behind Merlin loudly.


 

Surprised to hear his uncle's voice, Merlin turned quickly on his heels to face Blaise.


 

"I thought I had told you to stay at home Merlin. Or was that my imagination?" asked Blaise, his arms folded over his chest, his half moon glasses half way down the bridge of his nose.


 

"You did tell me Uncle," said Merlin, looking down sheepishly at his feet.


 

"And so why did you leave, if I may ask?" asked Blaise, who obviously already knew the answer.


 

"What goin' on Merlin?" asked Uther groggily.


 

"You are all dead now Uther," said Blaise turning to look at Uther.


 

Uther, for one, did not want to look Blaise in the eye, and turned away from him.


 

Blaise sighed and rolled his eyes. "Alright, look, this one time, I'm not going to be mad at any of you. You had the right idea. But next time, tell me when you're going somewhere against my wishes. Now, Merlin, this was your first lesson in war. Always be sharp during your watch, and don't ever feel like something is secure or fine, because things have a habit to go wrong when you think like that. And don't do what you did tonight in watch tomorrow, because look what happened. I managed to get an entire army behind and around you."


 

"What army?" asked Uther, not certain if he should believe Blaise or laugh at him.


 

"Why, once I knew that you had left, I figured I'd bring some reinforcements," said Blaise in a matter of fact tone, "Three adventurers and an old man are not enough to even the odds against a siege. No, not at all. So I rallied together some old time friends, and brought them here to help. We have about two hundred men and women at the ready, completely surrounding us."


 

As if that had been their cue, about two hundred fighters emerged from the woods into the clearing, their faces grim and dark. Amongst the fighters Merlin saw dwarves, elves, and wizards. Many faces he recognized.


 

Three people stepped forth from the fighters. These three were Envok, Geoffrey, and Anthon. Not surprisingly, Geoffrey was between Envok and Anthon.


 

Blaise looked over at Uther expectantly. "So you see Uther, here is my army, or should I say, our army. You, me, Envok, Geoffrey, and Anthon will form the War Council for as long as we stay and fight with you. Tomorrow night, we will gather and discuss how to break the siege at Deganwy. Tonight, we sleep, but first, I must show you your mounts."


 

With that, Blaise walked over to the edge of the forest and reemerged several minutes later leading four steeds, whom he kept in the shadows.


 

"Shiroix! You first!"


 

Shiroix eagerly got up and trotted over to Blaise.


 

Blaise took the reins of one steed and passed them to Shiroix. Shiroix naturally led the steed out of the shadows to where he could see his horse. As it would turn out, Blaise had given Shiroix a black stallion.


 

"His name is Thunder Shiroix. Be sure to take care of him," Blaise said with a slight smile.

"Of course sire."


 

"That's all that is asked. Uther, here's your horse. You left him in the stables in Ala Bora."


 

Uther graciously got up to reclaim his horse, a brown mare. Uther reached into the saddle and pulled a small cracker, which he fed to his horse.


 

"That's a good girl Beauty, that's a good girl," said Uther, rubbing Beauty's back.


 

"Alright Merlin. That leaves you. Come on up."


 

Merlin hesitantly got up. He'd never learned to ride. He'd always walked, always trusted his own two feet, and now here he was, a horse being offered to him.


 

"Uncle, I don't really want a horse," said Merlin quietly when he came up to Blaise to receive his steed.


 

"Well then my boy, you don't have to worry, because this is no horse," whispered Blaise back, a wide grin on his face. Not even a second later, a equine creature emerged from the shadows. Merlin had heard of such creatures, but never seen one. With the single horn in the center of its forehead, the creature was a unicorn.


 

The unicorn was majestic and beautiful. It had a slender muscular body, covered with moderate length snow white hair that was softer than anything Merlin could have ever imagined. The unicorn's mane was long, and hung several inches below its neck. The unicorn had brilliant sapphire blue eyes that reflected a caring nature. Its horn looked like it was made of a shining white ivory, which glistened with all the colors of the rainbow in the light of the camp fire. The unicorn was undoubtedly one of the most beautiful things that had ever been.


 

"His name is Caedmon," said Blaise, seeing Merlin's gaze of awe and admiration, "He's a strong one. Normally unicorns are solitary creatures, but Caedmon is different. I met him a few years back, and he was cared for in Ala Bora by the stable boys up until today when I asked him if she would like to have a rider. He said yes, and well, here we are now."


 

"Caedmon… that's a fitting name isn't it boy?" asked Merlin of the unicorn.


 

To his amazement, Merlin heard a reply in his head. "It is, isn't it Merlin?"


 

Shocked, Merlin looked to Blaise. "I just heard him in my head!"


 

Blaise chuckled. "Ah, yes, that would be right. You see, unicorns are very beautiful and intelligent creatures, and rarely stray to civilization. Thus the unicorn rarely forms a bond with the rider, but when they do, it is a great thing indeed. The bond lasts a lifetime, both mutually serving the other. It is a great honor Merlin to be this unicorn's rider."


 

"Blaise is right Merlin. You are indeed lucky to be my rider, and I am fortunate to be the steed of such a great man."


 

Quietly, the unicorn walked away. "Goodnight Merlin. We ride for the first tomorrow." With that, Caedmon found a tree, and laid down next to it, folding her legs under her much like a dog.


 

Blaise clapped his hands together and turned to face the army. "Alright everyone, get some shut eye. We got a long day of traveling tomorrow, and I want to set out early and get to Deganwy by nightfall. In the morning we will use our magic to get to Britain, but that can only take us so far with so many, and thus much of our journey will be walking. Execute."


Upon hearing execute, the army walked over to their horses and assorted steeds and pulled something to lay on from the saddle pack. Within less than a minute, everyone was on the ground sleeping. Merlin took it that execute meant do it, and so he lied down on the cold ground and fell asleep quickly.

Training


"Merlin! Wake up, yeh! I need to go run some errands for yeh uncle, and yeh need to come with me!" yelled Uther, tossing a tunic at Merlin. It had been almost a year since Merlin had arrived in Atlantis, and he had grown used to his uneventful life.


 

Groggily, Merlin turned around, burying his head under the covers. Seconds later, he was drying off with a towel, while Uther was laughing on the floor so hard, Merlin thought he might burst a kidney.


 

"It's not that funny!" Merlin said defiantly, albeit with a smile on his face.


 

Uther managed to get few words out in between the tears of laughter, those being, "You shoulda seen the look on yeh face!" followed by more laughter.


 

Merlin swung his tunic at Uther, then grudgingly put it on, gathered his things, and began to head out with a recovering Uther, and a grinning Shiroix. As Merlin found out upon his coming to Atlantis, Shiroix had become a part of the family, yet, no one knew how. It was almost as if he had been meant to be with Merlin, Aithne, and Blaise.


 

"You shut up," Merlin said to Shiroix, pointing a finger at him.


 

When Uther had finally managed to calm down sufficiently enough, he started to read the list.


 

"Alright, so Blaise wants me to go find him some books and animal parts, while yeh two work on something much more valuable.


 

"What is that?" Merlin and Shiroix asked simultaneously.


 

"Yeh two are gonna go to the training grounds."


 

Both of them complained, but when Uther bent down to scoop up some of the water from the ocean beside them in his bucket, their mouth magically stopped running.


 

Within twenty minutes, the trio was at the training grounds, and Uther was talking to someone.


 

"So Blaise told me that he wanted me to take these two to the training grounds for a couple of hours while I run his errands. He told me to put these two in the care of someone called Geoffrey. Do yeh know him?"


 

The man Uther was speaking to, a clean shaven man with red hair wearing full armor over a purple robe, replied to Uther slowly as he turned around to face Uther. "Yes, I think I might know him. How may I help you?"


 

It took a few minutes for Uther to register that this was the man he was looking for, and when he did, he violently grasped the man's small hand, and pumped it up and down quite rapidly.


 

"I'm Uther, third born son of King Constantine II of Britannia, brother to the true heir of the realm, Aurelianus Ambrosius," Uther introduced himself.


 

"Quite the name you have," said the small man, rubbing his arm, "I'm Geoffrey of Monmouth Shire, one of the three Council members."


 

"Council?" said Uther inquiringly.


 

Geoffrey put on a pained smile before answering. "The Council is the governing body of the political network that sustains the delicate structure of the Wizards of Atlantis."


 

Seeing the uncomprehending look on Uther's face, Geoffrey simplified his definition. "The three people who are the kings that the people choose."


 

Uther understood that much, as was clarified by his, "Ah."


 

"Well then," continued Geoffrey, "Since you two are here to train, I will show you each to your instructors. We will be seeing you, Uther."


 

Uther tried to persist, but lost quickly with a quick wave of Geoffrey's hand. Neither Merlin nor Shiroix know how Geoffrey did it.


 

Geoffrey began introductions. "Let's get to know one another, shall we? Indeed, let's. I am Geoffrey. And you two are…?" said Geoffrey, leaving Merlin and Shiroix to finish.


 

"Shiroix," said Shiroix.


 

"Merlin," said Merlin.


 

"Alright boys," said Geoffrey, placing a hand on each of the boys' backs, "Here in the training grounds we have several methods of training, which are swordplay, archery, axe throwing, and spell casting. You two are too young for spell casting, so you will be instructed in the other three, each with an expert in the craft."


 

"Who are the experts?" Merlin asked.


 

"You'll see," was Geoffrey's smiling reply. Merlin had a feeling he would regret this training.


 

After some walking, Geoffrey stopped with Merlin and Shiroix at the swordplay area of the training grounds. Then he picked up a sword and told Merlin and Shiroix to do likewise.


 

"You will both attack me," instructed Geoffrey, "and you will have no mercy. I am a Dark wizard, and you must slay me."


 

Without warning, Geoffrey struck at Merlin with lightning speed, who was able to successfully block the blow, paying for it with the loss of his balance. He toppled over, and was at Geoffrey's mercy.


 

"If I had been a Dark wizard, you would've been dead by now. Work on your swordsmanship. Now it's your turn Shiroix."


 

Shiroix did not waste any time. He immediately struck Geoffrey, who blocked the over hand blow, only to find it was a feint, and Shiroix was actually attacking his left side. Geoffrey quickly moved his sword to block Shiroix's blade, only to find that when Shiroix's sword struck his own, his went flying due to the angle of which it was hit.


 

"Impressive boy. Keep working and perhaps we'll have to send you to the military."


 

Shiroix sent Merlin a smug look. Before Merlin could reply, Geoffrey was up again and taking them to the next division of the training grounds, the archery range.


 

Waiting for them at the archery range was an elf. He stood tall, about six and a half feet, with his hands laced behind his back and a smile that said, "Welcome. I will crush you like a bug if you don't work hard."


 

"Hello, King Envok!" said Geoffrey, holding out his hand to the elf.


 

The elf took notice of the hand and gripped it firmly. He shook it up and down twice, and released his grasp.


 

Geoffrey pulled his hand away hastily and rubbed it gently. Then, noticing others were watching, he quit nursing himself and introduced Merlin and Shiroix to Envok.


 

"Sire, this is Merlin and this is Shiroix. They are here to learn from four masters, of which you are the second."


 

A mischievous gleam came into Envok's eyes. "Whom was the first master? Surely not you; you can barely withstand a handshake!"


 

Geoffrey's face turned a bright red, followed by stomping off and muttering to himself.


 

Envok laughed. "Ah, I always love to do that. I'm sure he'll try to come up with something tonight that I'll see right through and only embarrass himself further. Anyhow, I will be your archery instructor for the next few years, and if you do good enough we may even have one on one sessions and I may teach you in other arts as well. Come along now."


 

Envok waked hastily to an open target, and handed Merlin and Shiroix each a bow and a quiver of twenty arrows.


 

"Your goal," said Envok, "Is to get every last one of your arrows through any sign of danger. If there is none, you will aim for the centre of the target. Go."


 

Merlin barely had time to string his bow before seven wooden figures sprung up. He madly strung the bow and began aiming at each of the targets. He hit two in the head, which fell down, hit three where the heart would've been, and missed one. Of course, that still left one, which was shot down by Shiroix.


 

Merlin surveyed what Shiroix had accomplished with his targets. Every figure had been hit, right between the eyes just above the bridge of the nose. Shiroix had also hit a robber who had thought it would be safe enough to run past the entrance to the archery range, hit Merlin's last target, and shot the rest of his arrows into the centre of his target.


 

"Very good," said Envok, "You both did very well. Shiroix, you managed to hit all the targets and a few bonus. Merlin, you only managed to hit five, all in varying places. So overall, you did better."


 

"What?" asked Merlin and Shiroix simultaneously.


 

"Yes, Merlin did better," confirmed Envok, then explained, "You see, Shiroix, while you hit all the targets, you did not innovate, you only hit the targets. You also hit two objects which you were not instructed to do so, which more often loses a battle than wins it. Merlin, however, you shot two arrows into each target, slightly apart from each other, and you did not hit all the targets. Therefore, you have room for improvement, which is always a good thing."


 

Needless to say, both Merlin and Shiroix were surprised at Envok's answer.


 

"Moving on," shouted Envok, walking hastily away towards the ax-throwing range. Merlin and Shiroix had to run to keep up.


 

When Merlin and Shiroix saw Envok again, they noticed he was talking to a dwarf of small stature. Well, all dwarves have small stature, but this one was smaller than the rest. He had a red hair, and full beard, which was typical of a dwarf.


 

The dwarf threw his hands up in the air and stomped towards Merlin and Shiroix. "Never seek help from an elf," said the dwarf in a very deep voice, much the kind one would expect a dwarf to have, "Yer only will embarrass yer self."


 

Merlin and Shiroix looked at each other curiously, both knowing what the other was thinking. Then the dwarf spoke. "So yer two must be Merlin and Shiroix, no need to tell meh who's who, I alre'dy know. Now, I here am Prince Anthon II of th' Sev'nth Royal Dwarf Family."


 

"Um…" Merlin and Shiroix both mumbled simultaneously. They both found it very hard to understand the dwarf, who's accent was even thicker than Uther's.


 

Prince Anthon calmly explained. "Yer see here, there are sev'n dwarf families who cun ascend teh th' throne. I b'long teh one of them. Compendo?"


 

Both Merlin and Shiroix nodded their heads while they mentally deciphered what Anthon had just said.


 

"Ah'right now, so I'll beh teachin' yer how teh axe throw. Very usefel. So get teh it!"


 

"How do we do it?" asked Merlin.


 

"What? Yer don't know how to throw an axe?"


 

"No…" said Shiroix slowly.


 

"Well it's very simple. Yer hold the hand'l, yer bring it back, yer bring it for'd, and yer let 'er go. Now start throwin'!"


 

Hesitantly, Merlin and Shiroix started throwing axes at a square target several yards away, taking them from a rack on the wall. Meanwhile, Anthon leaned on his axe, watching Merlin and Shiroix. Once the rack was empty, he started laughing.


 

"What's so funny?" asked Shiroix, his face turning red.


 

"Yer two throw like elves!" said Anthon, quaking with laughter.


 

Calming down, Anthon explained further. "It's somethin' only a dwarf would u'derstand. Yer see, we dwarves and them elves has some riv'ry, and dwarves pride thems self on bein' better axe throwers."


 

"I see," said Shiroix, his arched eyebrows showing he really didn't.


 

"So an'how, yer two are done trainin' for the day, yer free to go, blah, blah, blah, no 'un cares, get a move on, I'll see yer two termorrow."


 

Merlin and Shiroix began walking hesitantly, then faster when Anthon picked up an axe.


 

Unsure where they should go, they started moving towards home. It was only midday, and Uther hadn't been given specific instructions by Blaise. At least, none that Uther had told Merlin and Shiroix.


 

"It's him!", "Merlin!", "The Victor!", were only a few of the things that Merlin and Shiroix heard as they walked down the streets. Usually the people shut their mouths when Merlin looked around, making him think he was hearing things.


 

"Shiroix?" started Merlin.


 

"Yes, I hear them too," Shiroix said as if he had read Merlin's mind. Sometimes Merlin wondered if Shiroix could. It most certainly would explain a great deal. "Perhaps if we ignore them they'll go away."


 

As Merlin and Shiroix soon found out, Shiroix's theory was flawed. Ignoring them only made them more aware of their presence, which was quite odd.


 

"Excuse me sire," said a little boy, tugging on Merlin's shirt, "How did you kill Vortigern?"


 

Merlin, naturally, was stunned. For years his life had been a solitary, quiet life. He and his mother had rarely spoken to one another, and there had been no one else to talk to. Now here he was as some sort of idol to these people.


 

"Um, well actually, I didn't kill Vortigern," confessed Merlin. The onlookers' expressions immediately changed to one of disbelief and disappointment.


 

"You didn't!" whined one boy, his eyes so believing and innocent.


 

"No, I didn't. I only fought him, and he got away," said Merlin, turning in a small circle to find to his surprise that he was encircled, not only by children, but also adults.


 

"Yes dearies, Vortigern got away, but Merlin will get him next time," said one of the mothers in the audience to her children.


 

"No, no, you don't understand," started Merlin.


 

"Tell us how you showed old Vortigern Merlin!" screamed a little girl in the outer audience.


 

The scream became a chant, and Merlin looked for Shiroix for help.


 

"Don't look at me," Shiroix said in a matter of fact tone, a grin spreading across his smug face, "I never get tired of this tale. How the great Merlin got himself locked in a dungeon for a night, and what's more, was nearly executed."


 

Merlin had no choice but to give in.


 

"Alright, alright, settle down. I'll tell you the story," Merlin said, his hands raised in surrender. The response was a cheer from the little ones.


 

"So here goes…"


 

***

Merlin's story took a while, as many questions were asked, but eventually he was through. By the time he was done, it was almost supper time.


 

"Since when did you single handedly kill a hundred men?" asked Shiroix casually on the walk home, "That's a part I haven't heard before."


 

"Oh like you wouldn't exaggerate it," replied a grinning Merlin.


 

Shiroix appeared to think about this one. "You know, you have a point."


 

Before too long, the twosome reached Blaise's house. Inside, a messenger was arguing with Blaise, who was sitting on his counter eating and apple. Beside him was Uther and on his other side was Aithne.


 

"No, he is not going, and that is final! Now be gone with you!" said Blaise, giving the messenger a face full of chewed apple.


 

"Who's not going where?" asked Merlin out of curiosity.

Friday, February 5, 2010

Now Continuing

Contrary to what I said in an earlier post, I will be continuing to post chapters online until the first book is finished. After the first book is finished, there will be no more chapters posted to this site, except perhaps a teaser chapter here or there.

Recently, I have reconsidered a piece of advice I received several months ago concerning the time span in between Merlin arriving at Atlantis and the Fall of Atlantis. I came to the conclusion that the chapter I threw in there between them simply doesn't belong, and has been removed from the final document and this blog as well. Instead, I will be posting several new chapters that fit neatly in between, of which about 10,000 words are completed. When I'm finished, I'm expecting the new section will be between 20,000 and 30,000 words, closer to the previous.

This new section deals with something that I have only fleetingly mentioned in the story so far: the war with Vortigern. In the chapter "Aftermath of the Fall", Uther mentioned war with the Saxons was inevitable, and earlier in the chapter "The True Heirs" it was said that the Saxons were allied with Uther and Aurelianus. Due to some changes, this is no longer so, and this re-write below from the chapter should explain. It starts with Merlin speaking.

"If you don't mind me asking, who are you? Why did you save me? Why did you betray Vortigern? Was the battle caused by you"? And who's your brother and how did he get a castle when Vortigern is the king?" fired Merlin.

"My, my, my, aren't you inquisitive. Anyhow, I suppose yeh do deserve some answers. After all, I saved yeh from death and told yeh to follow me without explanation. Me name is Uther, third and youngest son of King Constantine II of Britannia. I saved yeh because I saw the so called stick yeh carried. It's a wand. Yeh can't fool me by a change in clothing. Also, I didn't betray Vortigern; I was a spy for my brother, and the battle was my doing, at least partly. Yeh see, Vortigern was a fool and let the Saxons settle in Britannia. The Saxons, though, didn't think them were given enough land, and Vortigern, being the idiot he is, refused the Saxons. So them tricked him and sweet talked him into giving more land, and here we are now, the Saxons at war with Vortigern now that them are strong enough to declare war and win, and them will win too with Vortigern commanding his army.. So I gathered together a bunch of men and them became me army just in case something like today happened.

As you can see above, Vortigern seems now to be at war with the Saxons. Why? Well, for that, you'll have to read the new chapters being posted, one a day until they have all been posted up to where I am currently. However, several other changes have been made, which are listed below.

  • Two chapters have been deleted: The First Battle, and the prologue.
  • A revised version of the chapter "The Fall", which will describe the Fall as more of a battle than a flee is coming soon.

Saturday, December 5, 2009

Merlin's Story Update

As of approximately five minutes ago, Merlin's Story reached 40,000 words. The average novel is between 75,000 and 100,000 words, or about 300 to 400 pages. Now being longer than 40,000 words, Merlin's Story can no longer be considered a novella under the definition established by the Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America. Rather, Merlin's Story can be now be considered a novel.

I have not published any chapters on this blog for over five months now, and will no longer be publishing them for book publishing reasons.

I have written approximately 10,000 words in the last two weeks. Working at a steady pace, somewhat slower than this last week, Merlin's Story can be expected to be finished by the end of 2010 if things remain the way they are, by the end of May if things go well, and by the end of 2012 at the absolute very worst.

Sitting pretty at 186 pages currently, Merlin's Story is becoming considerably longer than I had anticipated, which was supposed to be a stand alone novel, spanning all of Merlin's life. In that, I have failed miserably, adding more and more to the story until finally one book would not do justice to Merlin. Thus Merlin's Story will not be one book, but rather two for certain, and more than possibly three books to form the Merlin's Story trilogy.

Keep checking up here for more info regarding Merlin's Story, due to be finished within the next year.

Thursday, September 24, 2009

1 Year Anniversary

As of today, it has been exactly one year since I began writing Merlin's Story. I have started developing several other stories since, but Merlin's Story still remains my main project, as it is closest to completion.

Sunday, September 20, 2009

1,000 Visitors

As of Friday, September 11, 2009, there have been over 1,000 visitors to Merlin's Story, over half of which have been international.

Monday, July 27, 2009

750 Visitors

As of today, 750 visitors have come to Merlin's Story. A remarkable accomplishment, especially considering the 500 visitor mark was hit last month and almost 80 visitors have come in the past two days, mainly from the U.S. and Canada. The most common search term people have come to Merlin's Story with is the search term 'merlin's story', or 'merlin story'.

Not long ago, NBC started their new series, "Merlin", and visitors have skyrocketed since. If you have not watched "Merlin", it is a remarkable series, very good, and offers a unique twist to the traditional versions of the Arthurian legends which can't be found anywhere else. A highly recommended show to watch.

Wednesday, July 15, 2009

Days of Now

Merlin heard loud, high pitched noises in the distance, as if someone were screeching. The stench of where he was almost unbearable, for he was surrounded by metal cans as big as himself filled to the brim with all sorts of things, from banana peels to small metal cylinders with letters on them like ‘AA’ or ‘C’.

Merlin looked around him to find he was in some sort of a dead-end hall with an open roof. At one end there was nothing but an impossible-to-scale wall. At the other end was a sight to behold.

There was a small white walking path, with many lines in it, forming squares. People walked in both directions along this path. Further beyond this was a black walking path, with odd lines drawn on it. Sometimes it was one line, sometimes it was two. Sometimes it was a solid line, sometimes it was dashed. Sometimes it was white, sometimes it was yellow.

And on this black walking path there were not people, but rather giant metal cages that moved incredibly fast and on their own as it appeared on four wheels. And inside these cages were people, many people. But in every cage, one person held a wheel of some sort.

Intrigued by this unique and fascinating sight, Merlin walked toward it slowly, as if in a dream. But the world Merlin saw from inside the strange hall was not the world he was walking toward. No, it was very much different, as Merlin soon found.

“Hey, watch it!”

“Aren’t you supposed to be in school?”

“Get outta my way you vermin!”

All of these and more was yelled at Merlin. For such a beautiful world, these people apparently did not like him. But Merlin didn’t care. If things went the way they had been for the last several hours, he wasn’t going to be here for long, so why worry?

Merlin walked down the white walking path for a ways, not caring of the dirty looks he received. He was intrigued by this world. Was it some realm Blaise hadn’t told him about? If it was, why hadn’t Blaise told him? Or had Blaise told him about this realm without Merlin realizing it?

Either way, Merlin intended to look around while he could, for this was the first time the voice wasn’t speaking and Merlin was free to go where he’d like. And Merlin intended to take full advantage of that opportunity.

Merlin passed several glass windows, something only the rich could afford. But then again, most of the people on the walking path were elegantly dressed, though from what Merlin had heard, these clothes he saw were ‘casual’. Where Merlin was from, these clothes were so fine, not even royalty could afford them.

Inside the glass windows, Merlin saw many odd devices. Being the curious boy he was, Merlin went inside many of the doors next to the glass windows to look at the marvels inside the rooms. The room seemed to be an indoor merchant’s stand. Merlin could tell because people were handed others coins and paper, which looked oddly familiar. Not only that, there was much yelling, presumably bargaining. The merchants here were very stubborn on their prices it seemed.

Some of the things Merlin saw were so marvelous he had to ask others about them. There was one thing, a strange box, almost like the color box back in the Utopian realm, that when you pressed a button, music played.

“Sire, could you tell me what this is?” asked Merlin of a man walking past him dressed elegantly in black leggings, a black overcoat, a white shirt, and a red drape hanging down over his chest. The man was also holding a small rectangular metal object to his ear and talking to it.

The man looked curiously at Merlin as if he had come from a completely other world. As it happened, Merlin did come from a different world. “This is a radio,” the man told Merlin, then asked questions of his own, putting away the small rectangular object in his pocket.

“My, isn’t this a fancy outfit. Is your dad a businessman?”

“What’s a businessman?” asked Merlin.

The man gave a small chuckle. “You must be from a small part of Britain then.”

Merlin was about to ask how the man knew he came from Britannia, but Merlin realized it must be his accent and instead replied to the man’s question. “Yes, I do.”

“Well then. Are you an actor for a play? You look like you’re dressed for a Shakespeare play,” the man said.

“Um, no I’m not an actor,” said Merlin, speaking slowly, his reply laced with confusion, “And if I may ask, who are you?

“Lebaiy Norclans, small business owner and astronaut for NASA. A pleasure to meet you…?” asked the man, extending out his hand to Merlin to shake.

Merlin gripped the man’s hand firmly and shook it, stating his name as he did so.

“Named after the famous wizard, eh? Well anyhow, I have some business to attend to, so if you will excuse me, I’ll be gone. But first, Merlin, I would like to get in touch later, so here’s my card, be sure to call when you have time. Comprendai?”

“Um, yeah, ok,” replied Merlin, not sure how Mr. Norclans would be able to hear him when he was all the way in the Utopian realm.

Merlin continued looking at the indoor merchant’s stand after Mr. Norclans left. Some of the things Merlin saw were just wondrous, strange, and familiar all at the same time. A few of the things that caught Merlin’s interest after the radio was the color box, which he learned was a television, something called a ‘computer’, which when you pushed buttons did amazing things like connecting to the world wide web. Another thing that caught Merlin’s interest was a book. Merlin had seen many books, but these books, there were many, many copies of this book. Not only that, these books were the best bound books Merlin had ever seen.

Merlin read the words on the cover. The letters were oddly shaped, so Merlin had a hard time reading it. It looked like the book was called ‘Lofd oj the Fings’. Underneath that, it said ‘J. R. R. Tolkien’. Then Merlin looked at it closer and he saw the book was actually called ‘Lord of the Rings’.

Curious, Merlin opened the book and began reading. It started with a story called ‘The Hobbit’. Merlin read the first few pages, and couldn’t put it down. He would’ve been there all day had the merchant not asked him if he’d like to purchase the book.

Merlin looked up, an expression of slight surprise on his face. “Um, yes, I would actually.”

“Then come on,” said the merchant in a deep voice and led Merlin to what he had heard people refer to as a ‘cash register’.

The merchant held out his hand for Merlin to shake, so Merlin did.

“No, give me the book!” yelled the merchant. Apparently he hadn’t wanted to shake Merlin’s hand. Merlin handed him the book.

The merchant looked at the tag on the book and punched in a few numbers on his cash register. Then he told Merlin a number.

“Twenty-two fifty.”

Merlin was puzzled by this number. The man looked a Merlin with an expression of impatience, rolled his eyes, and told Merlin it meant how much money he owed. Twenty-two dollars and fifty cents.

“But I don’t have any money,” said Merlin. Again, the man did not look pleased with the world.

“Look in your pockets,” said the merchant, “Maybe, just maybe, there’ll be some money there! Just maybe, and you can pay for this book and get out of my shop!”

Merlin did as the man advised and pulled out a large wad of green paper. In the corners of the paper were numbers. Merlin looked for a twenty-two, but all he saw were hundreds. He counted them as he went along for future reference, but lost count on thirty-seven.

Meanwhile, the merchant looked on with awe, a small trail of drool escaping his mouth. Merlin pretended not to notice and handed the man one of his slips of paper.

“Will this cover it?” he asked.

The merchant eagerly took the slip of paper and said yes so fast it sounded like a dog barking.

“Wait,” Merlin said, a hint of suspicion in his voice, “That’s a hundred. You told me I owed twenty-two fifty. You need to give me back the money you owe me.”

The merchant’s childish grin flew off his face at those words. He reached into the register and started pulling out slips of paper angrily, muttering to himself as he did so. It sounded like “Out of all the things this boy doesn’t know, he has to know money! Why? It’s just not fair! But of course, it has to be this way!”

Turning in Merlin’s direction, the merchant put on a clearly fake smile and gave Merlin one slip of paper with a fifty, one with a twenty, one with a five, two with a one, and one coin with a fifty on it. Merlin assumed the man was being honest, said thank you, and left the indoor merchant’s stand.

Merlin walked on the white path for a while until he found a small area of grass and trees, with smaller walking paths more like the ones at home. He heard this area referred to as ‘the park’.

Merlin found a shady tree and sat down by it. Then he opened his book and began to read.

For hours Merlin read, completely oblivious to what was around him. He read of small people called hobbits, and dwarves, and wizards, and dragons, and Middle-Earth, and treasure. He read about a strange creature carrying an invisible ring, of elves, of exciting adventure.

Merlin read and read, and saw similarities that could not be. The author’s representation of many of the creatures to be found in the book were much like those in real life, such as elves. Happy most of the time, but serious when need be. And then dwarves, always thinking of gold and jewels and fighting with axes.

Merlin kept on reading. For hard-to-read letters, Merlin sure got along fine. By the end of the day he was almost done with the first segment of the book. He would’ve finished, had he been able to resist the call of coming slumber.

For all that Merlin saw in his dreams that night, he may as well have been awake.

The first thing that Merlin saw was an old lady walking with a carrying bag. She sat down to talk to someone, and put the carrying bag on the edge of the chair. She was so engrossed in conversation that she didn’t notice a man walk up near her chair and take the carrying bag. A thief. Back in Britannia, that would cost the man his left hand.

A flash of light and Merlin was witnessing a robbery. A violent robbery. The robber was holding in one hand a canvas bag filled with the green slips Merlin had used to pay for his book. In the other hand was a smaller version of the exploding pipe Merlin had seen. And the exploding end was being held to the head of a terrified man.

The people Merlin was hearing referred to as ‘police’ also held exploding pipes, which the people were calling ‘guns’. Merlin heard the police speak in a calm, but firm voice to the robber, telling him to lay down his arms and no one would get hurt. But the robber wasn’t about to let his prize go. No. His answer to the police was shooting the man he was holding the gun to. The man fell instantly to the floor, while the robber made a dash for it.

A light flashed again and Merlin saw a war. Despite his limited knowledge of this place, a war was a war; nothing could change that.

Another flash and another and another, each time showing Merlin horrifying scenes of brutality and evil. What had happened to the peaceful world Merlin had seen?

Then it came; a big explosion. The sky turned so red it looked as if it were on fire. Perhaps it was. Merlin didn’t know, for he wasn’t looking at the sky, but the innocent people dying so quickly they couldn’t possibly know they were dying. One by one they fell, still smiling from enjoying the weather the world had been offering only to take it away.

From the explosion, a mushroom cloud emerged, exactly like the one Merlin saw on the bronze wall. For a few moments, all was quiet, and then Merlin heard the boom. It was deafening. There was a final flash of white light, and Merlin was in his red dragon form high above the earth. And flying towards him was a giant black dragon that was missing its front feet. Riding on this dragon was a hooded wizard dressed completely in black, save for his or her pale skin.

The black dragon engaged Merlin with its back claws, gripping Merlin’s abdomen. Caught, Merlin tried his hardest to escape the black dragon’s grasp, causing both to lose altitude in a terrifying free fall.

The black dragon didn’t loosen his grip on Merlin. If anything, he tightened it. Merlin, unable to contain himself, roared in agony, serving another purpose; warning the people below of Merlin’s coming.

The people fled just seconds before Merlin impacted the ground. Only then did the black dragon loosen his grip and fly off Merlin. In a normal fight, Merlin would’ve taken this moment to fly away. But this was no normal fight.

The black dragon’s rider dismounted and walked over to Merlin. Merlin heard the slither of a sword being unsheathed. Moments later, he felt the iron pierce his soft underbelly, straight into his heart.

500 Visitors

As of today, approximately 500 people have visited Merlin's story and counting. A great milestone, this event is celebrated with this post.

Saturday, March 21, 2009

Chapter 22: Days of End

Merlin was in a dark place, perhaps a cave or tunnel of some sort. He heard a faint dripping sound, presumably from stalactites above. Far of down the passage was a faint flickering light, similar to fire light.

Merlin, being the curious boy he was, went to investigate the light source. He stopped dead in his tracks as soon as he heard a bellow of pain. Merlin, thinking it was just his imagination, continued walking after an initial shock. Then the sound came again, and again, a man's voice breaking from pain, pain that Merlin nor any mortal man could know.

Merlin eventually came to the end of the passage, where it met the chamber from where the light was coming. Peeking around the corner, Merlin saw a man and a woman. The man was bound to the cave floor in the middle of the cavern by five chains: one for his head, two for his arms, and two for his legs, each chain leading to one of three small rocks. He was slightly hunched over, head down, his mildly long dark hair hanging over his head. The man was without a shirt, and had pants that had ripped just above the knees, leaving the man with long tatters flying around his legs.

The woman was almost the exact opposite of the man, Merlin noticed. She was well dressed in silk clothing with well kept hair. She held a cup just above the man's head. In the cup was a green-yellow liquid. Quickly, the woman leaned forward, and caught another drop of the same color liquid. Merlin, looking for the source of the drop, saw a snake suspended above the man's head, a dark green one with two long fangs. It was from those fangs that the drop had come from, and Merlin could see the trails of the venom down the fangs.

Out of nowhere, Merlin heard a deep boom. It sounded as if someone were pounding on the cave wall. The woman, startled by the sound, was unable to move fast enough to catch the drop of venom that fell on the man's head. Once more, the man howled and thrashed against the chains.

The booming noise came again, combining itself with the man's howling to create an unearthly sound. Merlin closed his eyes and covered his ears, wincing from the pain. When he opened his eyes, he looked over at the man, and saw a giant crack in the wall behind the man. There was another howl, yet, the man's mouth didn't open. He just stood there, hunched over and breathing hard. Th howl came again, followed by the booming noise again, then suddenly, the wall wasn't there anymore.

Standing where the wall once was a giant red wolf. The wolf was unlike any Merlin had ever seen. It had red fur, the same shade as blood, and four fangs, two on the bottom and two on the top. The fangs on the bottom lip curled up over the top lip and the ones on the top curled over the bottom lip. Where its eyes should've been were two black round balls that stared at anything and everything. Not only that, it was as big as two full-grown horses.

Merlin watched as the wolf bounded over to the man, grabbed the chains binding the man's head in its fangs, and snapped them into a hundred pieces. The wolf repeated the process with the other four chains, and soon the man was free. For what seemed to be an eternity, the man stayed hunched over, muttering words Merlin could hardly make out.

"So long ... Baldr... Odin ... ten-thousand years ... Asgard ... burn ... pay," were some of the things Merlin heard the man mutter in his deep, hateful voice.

The wolf howled, breaking the trance that had set. The woman ran to the man and was about to catch the drop of venom that would fall on his head any second. She was to slow, but the man wasn't. Just as the drop was about to fall, the man gripped the neck of the snake in an iron grasp, and forced the snake to drink it's own venom. In less than a second, the snake stopped trying to escape the man's grasp. The man dropped the life-less snake on the ground and slowly rose, revealing his facial features to Merlin.

The man's face was much different than Merlin had been expecting. The man had a clean-shaven face covered in many scars, the most prominent among them being the one cutting through his right eye. His eyes, Merlin noticed, were blue with a small ring of red around the pupil. This man, Merlin wisely decided, was not one to get into an argument with.

The man, standing full, was much taller than Merlin had previously thought, standing as tall as two men. He strode slowly toward the hole in the wall, the wolf and the woman following. Merlin also followed after a few moments, his curiosity getting the better of him.

Outside, it was howling. The wind was hitting whoever was foolish enough to stand its way, the rain whipping them. Merlin surveyed his surroundings and saw he was standing at the very peak of a mountain in the middle of the sea. Looking over the edge of the small ledge he was standing on, Merlin saw a sheer cliff, mile-high waves smashing against the side. The man stood just at the edge, his hair and tattered pants swirling around him.

"Free!" the man yelled, victory in his voice "free at long last! Now all shall pay! No one will live!"

"Thus it was in the end that the fate of the beginning was sealed," said the booming voice that seemed to emit from everywhere, followed by a flash of light.

The place Merlin was looking at was completely different from the cave where the man had been imprisoned. He was now looking at a vast plain. On one side of the plain was an army of giants. On the opposite side was a city with giant walls. Merlin guessed that the walls were at least a thousand meters high. In side the city was an army that seemed to glow. They filled every empty spot Merlin could see, yet, they were outnumbered, one to ten-thousand. Leading the army of giants were two. One was a giant himself, and seemed to burn. The other was the man that had been imprisoned in the mountain, now wearing full armor and carrying an odd weapon. A bow, that looked normal for the most part, but the arrows were what Merlin found odd. They weren't the wooden steel tipped arrows Merlin saw everyone use. Rather, it was made of a bushy plant, one that Blaise had called mistletoe.

Merlin watched the scene with great interest as the armies stood their ground, neither firing. A slight breeze was present, causing the hair of those without helmets to sway gently. The man said one word under his breath, which carried to all of his army due to the direction of the wind. Less than a minute later, the army began to march to the walls of the city. The defenders of the city took up their bows and began to pick off the attackers in vain, for it seemed that for every one killed, two sprouted up in place. The man who was leading, meanwhile, avoided the arrows by shape-shifting to become a lion, a bear, a mouse, whatever suited his fancy. The army of giants was unstoppable.

"Brothers will fight and kill each other," said the booming voice, whisking Merlin off to see what it had foretold.

Men were now fighting on the side of the attackers, along with many others of many species. Two men, who looked exactly like one another, were fighting each other with swords, the one that fought with the giants eventually ending the fight with a thrust through the heart.

"Sisters' will defile kinship," said the booming voice, followed by a flash of light. The scene Merlin saw was a young lady that was fighting with the defenders stabbing her mother in the back and opening the gate to the army outside.

The voice continued to show Merlin the happenings of the battle, taking him from place and narrating what was to happen there.

"No man will have mercy on another," was the last thing the voice said before showing him a rapid scene of events. The wolf killed one of the defenders in an epic battle in the center of the city. A young man who had an undeniable resemblance to the one that had just died came up on the wolf, rolled under it and stabbed his knife through to the heart. A flash of light and Merlin saw the giant that had seemed to burn. First the giant set a rainbow bridge on fire, causing the land the bridge lead to to also catch fire. Then the giant, surrounded by defenders of the city, did the only thing he could do. Set the world itself afire.

Before long, the fire spread, engulfing everyone and everything, leaving in its path nothing but ashes. There was another flash of light and Merlin was looking at the same place he had first seen, the place where Gaea had created the world. Except there was a tree floating there instead of land. Merlin heard a frightened scream and saw two people in the tree, a male and a female, looking down below them. Before Merlin could see what the two people were looking at, there was a flash of light and he was in a different place once more.